Tom : July 2014

Sunday 27 July 2014

28.7.14

Old Elf Ralf has got a nice leather suit case that is black and looks very heavy.

He's got a long light grey beard. It's about 19 or 20 cm long.

He looks like he's in his 90s. He looks very tired because his head Is bent down and I think he's got black rings under his eyes.

Old Elf Ralf is wearing a nice suit that's all black and his face looks like this(*ω*) all wrinkly.

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22.7.14

My shoes are realy cool. they have a nice neon green line and a nice bronze shape on the sides.

They are great for running because they are really light!

They are very good looking because they have a shiny look for them.

My shoes are AWESOME!!

23.7.14

The car is a silvery greyie bue and it is a Honda.

It has wido wipers that has stoped half way there and it has some black staind glass on the sides.

It has a red line around the number plate.

The car has got very thick black tyres.

24.6.14

The iPad is shiney on the front and on the back it has a VERY strong cover with the M-edge sing.

It has a sticker that says Clive 12 iPad because all the clive school iPads do but not with 12.

It is a shiney iPad but is has a lot of finer oil smudged on the hole screen.

The iPad is very well protected but when the covers off you drop it on a hard serfic it's gone!=(.

Tom