Mrs L Writing

WALT: write an imaginative letter from another planet using the correct letter format.

Use interesting sentence beginnings and a variety of sentence lengths

Use adverbs and adjectives to describe details in my sentences

In Mrs L's writing workshop we are in the letter writing group. In the letter writing group we got to do a letter from an other planet. We were focusing on sentence staters and the lengths of those sentences.

Here's mine!

82 Clover Rd

Colver

SeloSelo

BoyBoot

57 school Rd

Clive

New Zealand 

Dear Humans of Earth

Hello Humans we are pleased to inform you that by the time you are reading this ,or not I'm not sure how far your planet is from us, your planet is the last planet with life on it in the universe.

Our Sun is a red supergiant star so it's going to turn into a black hole. Well we call black holes cloolwertraited dark matter.

Please PLEASE don't send help. Trust us you will die. You'd be dead as a rock. Even if you think you won't die you will. We can't risk 7 billion of you getting speggetafyed.

Yours Truly.

Bob

PS If you do come bring KFC.

PPS There is still life in other universes… Duh.

 

My next step is to describe the sentences more.